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Mottled

posted at 7/14/2004 2:16 PM
ID# 74369

I'm waiting, where are you?
I'm waiting, hurry up
I'm waiting, what's the problem
I'm waiting, come on

I'm sulking, I can't have you
I'm sulking, it's not fair
I'm sulking, I feel foolish
I'm sulking, your still not there

I'm rushing, let's get to it
I'm rushing, don't like to wait
I'm rushing, anyhow
I'm rushing, I know, slow down

I'm hoping, I didn't wreck it
I'm hoping, there's still a chance
I'm hoping, you'll reappear
I'm hoping, it's just a slow dance.

Love & light
whitelace

re: Mottled

posted at 7/14/2004 2:19 PM
ID# 74371
This is a reply to: 74369
Woh!

finality

re: For finality

posted at 7/15/2004 6:56 PM
ID# 74453
This is a reply to: 74371

finality,

Your feedback was perfect. Woh!

I was just re-reading some of my poems and when I read this once I laughed my guts out. I felt the same as you Woh! When I am in the flow and stuff comes through me I am so in the moment that I'm not able to see what it is I am releasing until I read it later.

Guess what though? Writing it really did slow me down. Cool eh?
Thanks
Sometimes one word is very powerful,isn't it. Haven't had a good belly laugh at myself like that in a long time.
Love & light
whitelace